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This was a lot of fun, for a short linear AVN!
The part that let it down the most was the spelling - it really would have been worth putting it through a spell checker. like you've done with others of your games.
Although they almost look like it, the screenshots are not in chronological order.
I just found it funny how I could make em tell a little story by doing it like that. You know what? I'm even gonna add a key dangling.
Just note then! A key dangling scene does not appear in the novel!
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This was a lot of fun, for a short linear AVN!
The part that let it down the most was the spelling - it really would have been worth putting it through a spell checker. like you've done with others of your games.
Although they almost look like it, the screenshots are not in chronological order.
I just found it funny how I could make em tell a little story by doing it like that. You know what? I'm even gonna add a key dangling.
Just note then! A key dangling scene does not appear in the novel!